Missed Deadline

Yeah, so I didn't get that pitch done. Actually, I wrote most of it the other day, but I haven't quite got it to where I want it. That said, you can read what I've got so far here, and hopefully it'll be done completely tomorrow. I think the weakness here is the terrorist bad guys, but I'm kinda stuck on an alternative set of villains. Also, there's not nearly enough description of Kenya's looks or personality. We'll see if I can't sort that out tomorrow.